Wise Turtle Publishing

Drew up my first character and looking for some feedback.

Thanks in advance,
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Barrier is usually for force fields. Seeing it as a physical shield is a refreshing look. I'd drop the ammo flaw on the special uzi attacks and spend 5 endurance instead. You can recover Endurance between fights or once during a fight, but ammunition takes a full day to recharge in most settings.

Since you only used “Ammunition” for big burst attacks, you may also want to consider Activation or Unique Flaw: Reload. That is, you use up your clip in a burst of fire and have to spend a round swapping it out. It gets the flavor you were going for with Ammunition without actually making “running out” a possibility.

So, Reload would effectively be Activation, but with the advantage that it's assumed that you start off with an "activation" already banked. It changes the rhythm of use and "activation."

Cool. Thanks to both -- will adjust accordingly...